禁止无关回复，违者删帖扣分。 如果您在帖子中发现了发帖人或者回帖人的任何错误，请在这里跟帖。届时斑斑会根据此贴内的纠错情况相应的给出评分。希望并欢迎大家踊跃参加。已审毕后的新更新，请另行占楼重新编辑。 格式： 帖子名称 帖子链接 mistakes所在的楼层 指出错误，并改正。 也可以在原帖的下面跟帖改正。 在本贴跟帖附上连接并做说明。 一个主题贴中挑出来的错误，请您只占一层楼纠错。谢谢支持。 成功纠正一个错误，奖励5pb。 ———————————————————————————————————————————————— 如有不明， 请PM本版版主。 活着是美丽的 学习着是美丽的 工作着是美丽的…… 必要时，犯错误亦不失为一种美丽。 正如一辈子不离开地面，自然避开溺水的危险。 但只有经历呛水和疲惫，才能领略另类生活的风采和快乐。 就像我们每次考试前，都会做大量的练习。目的是检测出哪里薄弱，哪里不足。 人生如笔，您尽情描绘人生的草稿，即便错了也不要紧，可以用橡皮立即擦去。 犯错，是一件值得开心的事。我们总是在错误中前进的。 所以，不要怕犯错。 我们在犯错中自信。

作为一个英专的毕业生，很多修改其实没有意义。因为本身是没有错误的，只是一千个读者一千个哈姆雷特，所以表达方式、词的运用都会不一样。但是如果说大家展示自己的翻译水平，换一种表示方式让大家欣赏还是可以的。现在句子的语法越来越不严格了，很多外文书籍本身的表达方式可能就有问题。但信达雅一直是英翻的标准。

https://www.paipai.fm/r6738332_148   2205L

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They now in Shanghai have holiday.

可以说：They are spending the holidays in Shanghai now.

    
[Vocabulary] 道歉不要只会说sorry  [Vocabulary] 道歉不要只会说sorry

楼主主楼

Blame me.
这怪我。

这应该是比较中式的用法，一般都是blame sth on sb，放在楼主想表达的意思的话，用blame on me应该更妥当。

https://www.paipai.fm/r6738332_100#td_94935944

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Some person like travel outside, most time I'd like to take a coffee and stay at home,watch some new on my phone.

纠正加改正：
Some people like to travel outside, but I prefer to stay at home, drink coffee and watch something new on my
phone.
这里最大的纠错点是some这个副词不可接person。person虽然可数但只限定知道人数多少可使用，现代英语已经不使用persons，只有法律刑侦会加s当复数形式persons。person复数形式为people。其余的就是改正小错误家删减字数、更正顺序让句子读起来比较顺。多多练习加油~

https://www.paipai.fm/r6205315/

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Today, my high school had a big band concert and so my friend and her older brother (whom i somewhat i like [1] and will call boy A) drove with me and my mom  [2] to the concert place
...
so my mom was saying how boy B was soo much nicer and lovely?!?!?!?!? than boy A!!!! [3]

[1]: 多余的一个 i - whom i somewhat like
[2]: with my mom and me
[3]: my mom was saying how boy B was soo much nicer and lovelier (or more lovely) than boy A!


2L

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Wish you continue to update~~[1]

[1] Wish you will continue to update~~




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You seems  to be a new paier~~[1]

[1] You seem to be


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There has been soooo much snow and midterms are postponed for another 2 day!!![1]

[1] Another 2 days

美丽的句子 漂亮的翻译
http://www.paipai.fm/r6201116/
1楼


Original: Love is not a matter of counting the days. It's making the days count.

爱情不是数着日子过去，它让每个日子都变得有意义。

Corrections: Love is not about counting the days. It makes everyday counts.

Original: First love is unforgettable all one's life.

初恋是永生难忘的。

Corrections: First love is unforgettable in life.

Original: In the very smallest cot there is room enough for a loving pair.

哪怕是最小的茅舍，对一对恋人来说都有足够的空间。

Corrections: Even the tiniest flat is spacious enough for a pair of lovers.

Original: There is no hiding from lover's eyes.

什么也瞒不过恋人的眼睛。

Corrections: Nothing can hide from a lover's eyes.

Original: Love is a fire which burns unseen.

爱情是无形燃烧的火焰。

Corrections: Love is fire, burining invisibly.

Original: But if the while I think on thee, dear friend, all losses are restored, and sorrows end.

只要我一想起你，亲爱的人，所有的失落和遗憾烟消云散

Corrections: Once I think of you, my dear, all the sorrows and disappointment disappear.

帖子：please get me a good movie about dog
http://www.paipai.fm/read.php?tid=6230905&keyword=
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Original content: i like dog, has somebody get me a good movie about dog.

A better and correct way of saying that would be: I like dogs, could somebody please recommend a good movie about dogs to me?

帖子名称 12月签到帖
帖子链接 http://www.paipai.fm/r6717236_4/
mistakes所在的楼层
指出错误，并改正。


55层
I was moved.
这句话的语法错误类型是sf（sentence fragment)意思是语句不完整。
她想说的可能是 I moved.（我搬走了）或者 I was moved by the movie. 我被（电影）所感动。因为单纯的被动是缺少宾语的，如果直译她的句子就是 我被xx感动，sf。

50层
It's quite tough to keep fit and I will try my best to achieve it.错误类型：ro（run-on)两个完整句子不能用"coordinating conjunction"连接（拓展阅读：http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/coordinatingconjunction.htm） 正确使用是：It's quite tough to keep fit； and I will try my best to achieve it.或者使用句号。（标点符号后需要空一格为语法规定）


49层
I'm still very tired ah, to work overtime. to do something 是属于infinitives，wf 但明显这里不是表达还要去工作，而是表达：我很累因为我过度工作。所以应该是：I'm still very tired for work overtime.


45层
eyes are ache 首先缺少定语，定语是必须的，虽然中文貌似不太要求。然后ache是用作名词或者动词.  所以更正：I felt an ache in my eyes.                
或者 My eyes ache.


44层
Today is Wednesday, I want to eat sausage. ro 应该是：Today is Wednesday; I want to eat sausage.


41层
Rianing,raining.i so hate this weathe and so miss sun. sp 拼错了俩 raining weather


33
Today I become a formal membership of paipai. vt Today I became a formal membership of paipai.


32 the weather of Guangdong  changes often. mm The weather of Guangdong  often changes.


31
December is the last month of the year 2015,come on baby. ro December is the last month of the year 2015;come on baby.


26
love isa lie, it can not be forever, ro+sp Love is a lie; it can not be forever. 后半句我觉得应该是：Love（it） often doesn't last forever. be forever 我不知道有没有错我是没怎么听过，然后can是当做“能力” ，爱 没有能力 作为 永远。我觉得很奇怪。我写的是 爱 一般 不能 持续  到永远。


23
today  is  the frist day of  month. sp+sf+p 拼写错误: first 然后month不加定冠词the 就表示 所有月份。所以这句的意思是 今天是每月的第一天。 更正：Today  is  the first day of  this month.


22 It's a new day!Not only it's the new beginning of the month,but also mine ! sf  not only, but also 是correlative conjunction。句子明显不完整，然后这句话but also 后面和前面的内容不对称。我使用这个片段，补全了下作为例子：Not only did December first is the new beginning of this month, but it also gave me a new chance to earn pb.如果后面是完整句子 do 是必须的，然后后面的主语要在but和also之间。


19
I want I have some good news. ww  I hope I will have some good news.作为预测，应该是我希望，而不是我想要。（个人感觉）然后改变了时态。


18 Every morning is a difficult family to get up.dm    早上是个困难家族去起床。虽然family可能是我不知道的用法，但早上作主语的话就变成了早上 起床，而不是你早上起床。“早上”是不能起床的，起床的是你，所以dm了。然后有点怪异，我重写了下：It is tough for me to get up earlier in the morning.


17 Today the weather is good, but the fog haze, Lu bucket can't see. p+ro+dm today 是个introductory material，所以需要一个comma。后面lu bucket 是个人还是特殊名词，特殊名词后面的bucket也要大写，然后我没看懂是啥东西。如果是一个不是人的东西，那也有点问题，因为他不能看，所以这个物品要有能力去看，是dm错误，显然某些物品是不能看的。比如 我能看见鼠标。（无误） 鼠标不能被我看见。（无误） 鼠标不能看。（错误） 更正：Today, the weather is good, but the fog haze; Lu bucket can't be seen.




13
This is new January new day, come on. ww+ro 错词:December 我不记得两个宾语的错误叫什么了。然后更正 This is the new day of December.Come on.


6 I need coffer. ww coffee


5 Today is the first time I Sign in  here, my oral English is so poor, to practice exercises = ro sf Today is the first time I sign in  here. My oral English is so poor, so I need to practice more exercises .=是大小写错误


错误类型最多的是sf dm ww p 缺少主语太多了，句号错误或者缺少句号，大小写问题懒得贴了。我以为会出现很多代词问题，事实上没人使用代词……

可能他不太清楚 network 是指什么， 不如干脆写 "Could you email me the software?"

3月签到帖
http://www.paipai.fm/r6612869_7/
92楼 frient应改为 friend
102楼 egg应改为eggs

http://www.paipai.fm/r6612869_9/

121楼 be this like应改为 be like this
125楼 cook应改为cooked
128楼 feeling应改为feel

有个美国朋友在电话中建议我用一个聊天软件，因我不知他说的是什么软件。就说: ' why don't you send the software to me through the netwok ?  （我想要他通过网上的E-mail什么的传给我）， 但对方回应：‘What?I don't  understand!   请教，我英语说错啦？

名称 3月签到贴
链接 http://www.paipai.fm/r6215010/
错误楼层 68

拼写错误 第二句 counsumed 应该是consumed

http://www.paipai.fm/r6214224/
floor 13

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Original sentence: oh, my god, i must to stay at home until school term beginning. i am so boring, my dad had go to workplace, and my mum will go there day after tomorrow. when my mum go there, i will be one person stay at home.

A few suggestions and corrections for you.
1.) When you are writing don't use spoken English.  Eg. "oh, my god".
2.) Always use proper punctuation and remember to capitalize your pronouns when writing. Eg. "I" not "i".
3.)Remember that words ending in "-ing" are supposed to be used to show possession.  The noun used in the sentence much show ownership. The sentence "I'm so boring." is correct; however, I believe you're trying to say, "I'm (I am) so bored." meaning that you are having the feeling of boredom.  
So after those suggestions your writing should look a little more like this....

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Corrected sentence: I must stay at home until the school term begins.  I'm so bored because my dad has to go to work and my mum will also be going there in two days. When she goes, I will be home alone.

That's it for now :)

小問題可以在這裡提嗎？
http://www.paipai.fm/r6231717/
7楼
雖然只是一個字，但很多人搞錯
在這裡大人應該是想說good idea

ideal 是一個adjective
idea 是一個noun
good 也是一個 adjective
你不會用一個adjective去形容另外一個adjective

you can say: it's a good idea or even a ideal idea:)

ps 格式有誤請告知，謝謝

帖子链接: http://www.paipai.fm/r6212472_21/
mistakes所在的楼层:310楼

1. Sometimes   everyone  want  to  be  assisted
--> Everyone wants to be assisted sometimes / Sometimes, everyone  wants  to  be  assisted

mistakes所在的楼层: 311楼

1. TO assist somebody is very important in their life..
--> To assist somebody is very important in their lives.

2. You never assist me whatever i have done .
--> You never assist with whatever I have done . / You have never assisted in whatever I have done

帖子链接: http://www.paipai.fm/r6212472_21/
mistakes所在的楼层:310楼

1. Sometimes   everyone  want  to  be  assisted
--> Everyone wants to be assisted sometimes / Sometimes, everyone  wants  to  be  assisted

mistakes所在的楼层: 311楼

1. TO assist somebody is very important in their life..
--> To assist somebody is very important in their lives.

2. You never assist me whatever i have done .
--> You never assist with whatever I have done . / You have never assisted in whatever I have done

帖子名称: 美丽的句子 漂亮的翻译
帖子链接: http://www.paipai.fm/r6201116/
mistakes所在的楼层: 10楼

When I love you, but you do not know this love;
When you know this love too, but I already tired.

應是:

When I'm in love with you,  you do not know this love;
But after you've learned about this love too, I'm already tired.

帖子名称: 美丽的句子 漂亮的翻译
帖子链接: http://www.paipai.fm/r6201116/
mistakes所在的楼层: 9楼

The lonesomest thing most people not get, you know,
最凄凉最弄人的不是你知道,
Lost loved that moment,
失去所爱的那一刻,
But you still wandering,
而是你还在徘徊,
Judah did not know that has been lost.
犹未知道已经失去.

應是:

The most lonesome thing that most people don't get
最凄凉最弄人的不是你知道

Is not the very moment when you've learned you had lost your loved one
失去所爱的那一刻,

But you're still wondering around
而是你还在徘徊

Without knowing that you've actually lost it
犹未知道已经失去

谁捡走了我的玻璃鞋,寻找遗失的玻璃鞋.
I am looking for the missing glass-shoes who has picked it up
--> Who found my glass slippers, I am looking for my lost glass slippers.
==》Who found my missing slippers, for which I have been looking .