Beginning this summer, even here the next several days of rain_派派后花园

用户中心 游戏论坛 社区服务
发帖 回复
阅读:1912 回复:3

[Novel] Beginning this summer, even here the next several days of rain

刷新数据 楼层直达
fireye

ZxID:1689292

等级: 自由撰稿
www.hichou.com
举报 只看楼主 使用道具 楼主   发表于: 2011-08-16 0

  Beginning this summer, even here the next several days ofrain, the sun's anger at once extinguished, and the weather has become very coolthat people are feeling refreshed.

  When it rains, foam has been ofcoffee, sitting in his study playing online games, but can not help, but beattracted to the rain outside. Rain on the leaves, issued dull sound; rain hitthe road, splashes of white foam; rain hit the racks, the issue sounds sweettinkle.

  Lie in the  window  sill and see rain, dense rain such aspearl curtains, hammer down from the sky, grab a hand, her lack of playfullyescape, leaving only a trace of cool in the palm of the hand.

  Afterthe rain, my friends and barefoot, to play in the water puddles in the area.Walk through the rain, my little feet very comfortable, I splash a smallpartner, and made each other who are wet, and we really enjoyedourselves.

  Rain, you give us a cool, but also brought mehappiness.

[ 此帖被左。微希在2011-08-20 18:21重新编辑 ]
本帖最近评分记录: 1 条评分 派派币 +5
  • 左。微希

    派派币 +5 2011-08-20

    英语角第一次发帖奖励

www.qinday.com www.ftjxmwj.com wwwtlfcd.com www.ychello.com www.shirmay.com www.hichou.com
溪寒暄

ZxID:15811761

等级: 博览群书
举报 只看该作者 沙发   发表于: 2011-08-17 0
— (左。微希) 在英语角回帖,请亲尽量使用英语,大家一起练习英语嘛。谢谢理解与配合。O(∩_∩)O (2011-08-20 18:30) —
还要翻译.......
ic_qiand

ZxID:6983058

等级: 读书识字
举报 只看该作者 板凳   发表于: 2011-08-20 0
好新颖的文风!!!--> How novel this prose style is !!!
树新风 --> Tree New Bee --> ? ? ?
[ 此帖被ic_qiand在2011-08-20 18:36重新编辑 ]
左。微希

ZxID:9152821


等级: 派派贵宾
配偶: 青梅暖酒
举报 只看该作者 地板   发表于: 2011-08-20 0
I saw this article somewhere on the Internet.

However,  I don't think it's a nice model assey. In my opinion, there are lots of mistakes in grammar.
发帖 回复