20 July 2012

This day is Friday. I am surprised that Friday is holiday. It's amazing and wonderful. So, I slept for the
whole morning. I felt very satisfied. In the afternoon, I played a game with my father on Paipai. The
name is “I guess you draw”. This game is very funny. My drawing was so bad, so my father on Paipai
knew nothing if only according to my drawing. Luckily, my explanation was very good. So, my father on
paipai doped out the meaning of many words.

All in all, this day is a funny day.

21 July 2012

This day is Saturday. Although it is holiday, but my teacher is on duty today. So I have to go to
work. It's terrible, although I have nothing to do.

In the morning, there was no one in the newspaper office except me. I was afraid of being alone. But
after a while, I calmed down and began to play with computer.

In the afternoon, my teacher came. Luckily, he gave me a task to phone a man. To my surprise,
however, I didn't accomplish the task. I was so sad. Although my teacher has comforted me, I have been still sad.

My best friend called me to play table game. So I had to go off work at 4 o'clock. In the evening, I had a dinner with my friend.

In brief, this day is boring. I don't like this.

22 July 2012

Although I slept very late yesterday, I woke up very early this morning. As soon as I woke up, I played
with an ipod on the bed. Because my parents woke up a little late, I didn't eat breakfast.

In the afternoon, I took a nap. Unexcitedly, I woke up at 4 o'clock. Then, I had to go to the dentist with my mother.

In the evening, I had learned some new words in English Corner.

As soon as tomorrow I will have to go to work. I am very sad.

I am happy to see that you continue to write your diary.

Practice makes perfect. I believe your English will be improved a lot.

30 July 2012

I have to say last week I met a lot of amazing things. So my dear diary, I stopped writing the diary for a week. What a pity!

However, today is Monday. I believe this is a new week. There is an old Chinese saying that after a storm comes a calm. So I believe that this week I will be very lucky.

On the whole, I think I have to say last week I met something. Although I am not willing to recall those
things, I still have to find a place to record it.

On Tuesday, I lost my mobile phone. It cost 3800 yuan, I was very sad.

Saturday was the first anniversary of my registration on Paipai as well as my little lion's birthday. I
prepared for them from Friday to Saturday. I was very busy and not very happy.

On Sunday, my grandmother went to hospital, because her leg was broken. I put my photos on PaiPai.
Maybe I was stimulated? I am not sure.

BTW, the Olympic Games started on July 28th. I feel impelled to speak such a big thing. China has got 12 medals. A half of them are gold. A half of them are gold, four of them are silver, and the rest are copper. Congratulations to China! I am sure that China is great!
BTW2: I think SunYang is handsome. I like him.

BTW3: I anticipate seeing English Corner Medal very much. Do I want to get the medal very much? I am not sure.

I am glad to see that the using of past tense has been improved.

Next time, I hope not to see "although" and "but" in one sentence.

31 July 2012

Today I met a tremendous surprise. Yes, really surprised. Yesterday I told myself that: after a storm
comes a calm. So I believed that this week I would be very lucky. Today the words come true. I have
found my lost mobile phone. I have to say it's amazing. The mobile phone was under my pillow.

At 1 o'clock. I went to sleep. But outside the window, the light of the lamp was so bright that I can't
sleep. Therefore, I had to read a novel on the bed. After a while, I felt my pillow was so low that I can't
bear it. And then, I put my arm under the pillow. But to my surprise, there was something under the
pillow. To my surprise, it was my lost mobile phone! The reality was so surprising that I almost can't
accept.

It had been lasted for a week since I lost my mobile phone. I have to admit that I can't accept the fact
today. I can't accept my mother has given me a new mobile phone. That reminds me I lost my mobile
phone every time. It cost 3800 Yuan. Luckily, I have found my lost mobile phone. Luckily, it only gave me a scare but not became the truth. Luckily......God bless!

BTW, I clearly remember that the battery of my mobile phone was half filled. But when I called my mobile phone, it was automatically turned off. Was it because of lacking the power? I don't understand.

As usual, I am the critical one.
It seems fine to use conjunctions like "but, so" in a simple sentence, however, both in English and Chinese, conjunctions are used to connect two simple sentences, and that's why they are called conjunctions. As a result, please try to avoid using them to start a simple sentence, it is not a big problem. They just seems unnecessary to be there in the written text.
Conjunctions are important in English, but use it wisely. Using them everywhere is no better than not use them at all.

I saw you used the word "meet" several times recently, meet a surprise is really "localised". Normally surprise goes after "get" or "have", and if you want to be more creative, you can use "spring".
Also, "Yesterday I told that", this part should be "Yesterday I was told that", passive voice. "It was so surprised that I almost can't accept." It is not clear what "it" stands for in this sentence. surprised an adjective to describe people, not object. This sentence could be "I was so surprised..." or "It is such a surprise..."
"I was clear reminded that my telephone has a half of battery. " In this case, if some one reminded you, it is better to identify the person and change clear to clearly. If you just want to say "I can clearly remember that...", there is no need to use passive voice in this case.



BTW, traditionally, westerner think Sunday is the beginning of a week.

I agree with almost everything you said except for the tenth line.

The sentence "after a storm comes a calm" appeared in Ning's diary yesterday, so I suppose the sentence is what Ning told herself. There is no need to use  passive voice.    

9 August 2012

Long time to see! My dear diary! I am sorry for write it. But today is the last day I went to go to the newspaper office. I really have a lot of feelings to write it.

After a mouth, I also through a lot of things. My teacher said that:"The internship plays an important role in making career successful. You will benefit a lot from this experience. I believe. " Now that I think about it, Although I didn't learnt a lot of things. However, I must admit, my teacher really teach me a lot. For instance, the resolute is the most important things. No matter what we do, we must have resolute. Also, I must admit,  I am too indecisive for sometimes. Everythings we must talk about for others, not decide any things. But to my teacher, I learnt the resolute.

Secondly, the skill of the have an interview with others has also very important. Faced with different people, you must have different methods. Someone you have listen to carefully for them. But the more of the time, you should break them speak. Although it's not politeness, however, you time is gold, you have a lot of things to do it. You didn't have a lot of times to waste of them.

The third of all, productiveness has also important things. Fast have interview with others, fast write a press release, fast do anything. That's very important. As a journalist, you don't have a noon break, you don't have a relax, Even, you don't have any break,  You should keep the nervous for every time. Jusr you a journalist. It's your duty. So I will send a gift for my teacher--------a peppermint sweets. Because of when I meet the trouble things,  my teacher always smoke a lot and walk around and around. That's a terrible habit. So I decide to send a gift. I don't  know my teacher what will accept or not. But it's only my willing.
          Best wishes for my teacher!!!
          Best wishes for the three gorges newspaper office!!!
          Best wishes for the Hubei daily newspaper group three gorges newspaper office!!!

I am so happy to see that you have kept on your diary till now  
please pay much attention to your grammar