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[Free Talk] 自己寫的一首英文詩:P

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Darkness and light
In a city
Houses collapse in a second
Bodies buried beneath.
A desperate desire to survive
Will there be a miracle?

A lot of passersby, passing by.
Underneath these ordinary faces
Hearts are beating
Life goes on.

In another city.
Bombs light up the night
Fireworks blossom across the sky.
Bursting in bright colours.
Welcoming the New Year
The passersby stop.
Wondering what the future holds.

Two cities
Two different stories.
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举报 只看该作者 沙发   发表于: 2012-04-12 0
It is definitely a good try. I enjoy reading what you wrote.

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thank you~^^

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举报 只看该作者 板凳   发表于: 2012-04-13 0
I like the two lines in the end ..
Two cities,
two different stories.

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thank you~^^
indeed, i want to show a theme that-
under the same sky,
there are different people living in different ways~^^

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举报 只看该作者 地板   发表于: 2012-04-13 0
actually,i wrote this poem a long time ago for a competition
yet, i didn't get any awards and comments
so i wanna share this with you all and
wanna know about your feelings after reading this poem~

岚君。

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I can feel sadness through your poem, however, I guess the reason for your not receiving any awards could be the rhyme issue.
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