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leave417

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I have a problem ,which it made me English score is pretty low.
So I want to have a way to help me.
It is how to remember English words.
Because I'm a three grade in middle school,so that I can't have a great number of time to remember its.
In a word,I hope who can help me to solve the problem.
thanks.~

PS:如果这个帖子里面发现什么语法问题,请指出。某只在这里先谢谢各位了!~
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made——makes
remove it。。
me——my
remove is。。
have——find out
it is how I can memorize English words properly.
because I'm a third grade student in the middle school, I don't have plenty of time to memorize them.
I hope that somebody will help me to solve this problem.

too many mistakes
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那些似是而非的。。
举报 只看该作者 板凳   发表于: 2010-02-15 0
Well...I also have some gramma issue.
Here just what I thought.

For the Attributive Clauses in first sentence, you should say:
"which made my English score pretty low."
there should no 'it' before the verb. For the use of 'make', make sth + adj., so here "my English score' as a noun, "low" as an adjective, there should no "is" between them. Otherwise, you should say sth like 'make sb do sth', obvious, it doesn't really work here.

For the second sentence, just a little bit awkward...'have' is not a perfact verb to describe what you want...well...just in my opinion...>_<...use 'figure out' or 'find out' instead of 'have'.

For the fourth one, not exactly errors, but it is better to remove 'so that' and change "can't " to "don't " ...(关于can't和don't我只能说这事一种感觉上的事情,don't只是表达一种不能,而can't更有一种主观上的完全没有可能性的不能。呃……这个是有点吹毛求疵……只是怎么读都觉得有一些些别扭……)Then at the end of this sentence, "its" should be replaced by “them” to represent “English words”.

So...that's all...
If you have any thoughts, let me know...we can discuss about it.
However I don't have a good way to memorize words...>_<...Sorry for this.
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katy21413

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a good way 2 memorize words is 2 use it.
we know how 2 write and talk Chinese without any mistakes at all (most time) because we use it on our daily bases.
for example, if u wanna memorize the word ROCK, u could make one or two sentences out of it to help u 2 memorize it:
1. I am sooo smart, I am doing great on my English exam, WHOOOOOO, I ROCK!
2. I love to listen to the rock music, its my favorite type music!
Remember when we r in grade 1 or 2? This is the way my Chinese teacher used to help us memorize those Chinese words.
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instead of (most time), it should be most of the time.

well the first thing you have to do is don't feel afraid of learning English. Actually it's not that tough. You can try to write the vocabulary on small pieces of cards. the word, its meaning and a sentence. read it whenever you are free.

But i guess the best way is to read lots of books( novels or story books). the interesting stories will attract you. after a period of time, i'm pretty sure that you'll have improvements in English.
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According to your original article, there are many mistakes, I think it is better to write like this(just for grammar):

Help needed:

I have a problem which makes my English score pretty low, so I want to find a way to solve my problem in English, that is, how to remember English words.
As I'm a year 3 student in a middle school, I have little time to gain more vocabularies.

Following are my suggestions:
As you are a final year student in middle school, actually it is better for you remember all the words listed on the last pages of the textbook, it is mandatory. If you have remembered all these vocabularies, there is no need for you to know more extra words because it is enough for the Secondary School Entrance Examination.

When you graduate from the middle school, you have enough time in the summer holiday, then you can watch some movies and listen to English songs. If you want to read English articles, I recommend you to read English newspapers or novels, because it will be more attractive to you.

Hope it is useful to you.
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I figure out that I have a serious problem when learning English, which makes my English score pretty low.
So I want to find a method which helps me to solve this problem.
The problem is how to remember those English words. Since/ Because I am a junior student in middle high school, I don’t have plenty of time to do the work.
Learning a new language is a time consuming job, you need to spend at least half an hour a day to remember those words. You can tear up the vocabulary list from 6 textbooks and put them together. Start to remember them by unit not by order: A-Z in total. Then it will seem easier for you to remember those words. The most important thing for you is repeating and reviewing the words you remembered the day before.
Good luck for you. I think the words you need to learn is not too much and too difficult. Get a higher score in grade 9 will be easy. Just study hard. There is not easy way for you to learn a language.
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reading is a way to know more words
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i have a problem. I need to learn how to memorize English words, the lack of which is what's making my English score low, so i want to find a way to help myself. I'm an eighth grader (elementary school goes up to 5th grade, middle school starts at 6th grade in U.S., so third grade in middle school equals 8th grade), so i don't have a lot of time to memorize words. I hope someone can help me solve this problem. thanks.
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since the advisers above have pointed out many grammer mistakes, here ,i want to tell you some experience when i was in middle school.  memorizing words is always a  great problem , but if you can do it  well, you can have an improvement in your English studying. i memorize words through its pronunciation. so when i have to remember words,  i will read aloud and have an impression on them first.  then, read or text  them a second time  some hours later and make sure how many words you can remember. then emphasize  those words you can't remeber. read again and again,maybe f your habits is write.whaterever,  your must read them. reading can stimulate your nevers and have a better impression. What's more, according to the law of forgetten, you must read them the next two days then after a week, read them again, if you can remember most of them, your efforts have the results.
this is my opinion, you can have a try.  and find a most suitable method for yourself.  suitable is the most important .
at last, i wish you have an improvement.
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从你所写的帖子来看,我认为你在语法上存在很多问题,由于你现在才刚刚初三,对词汇的要求应该不是很大,因此你只要记得书上的基础词汇就可以了,但是你的语法却必须要改进一下,这对你包括写作和理解复杂的句子都有很大的帮助,而且就应试的角度来说,语法可能更为重要,单词只要常用记得即可
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If you have some problems in grammar,you can leave a message to me.If I see the message,I will help you.
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you should remember the words according to the situation of the passsage .and review it regularly!
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well, i think here is 2 ways  to remember words
first is quite Chines traditional way, ie. remember the spelling and the chinese meaning. at the same time, u also need to understand the gramma and the rule to use words
the second way is to remember the sound of words because u know the sound, so u can spell it. here u don't need to remember the chinese meaning or the gramma rule, because u can make the sentances straightly without thinking about the gramma.
however, the most important thing u need to do is to use the word, so u will not forget them even long time later.
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i think you can remember the words by their pronunciation,i awlays remember words in this way.and you can read your passage more often,then you can also remember how it usually in the text,and you will improve your grammer.
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希望我下面的东西能够给你一点点的帮助。
英国有3000多年的历史,英语随着这段很悠远的历史也产生了很多的变化,当代的英语最接近古英语的是澳大利亚(难以想象吧?那发音多销魂~)据不完全统计,目前英语常用词汇有80%以上来自于法语(拉丁语)。英语最核心的词汇以本族语居多,随着词汇量的增加,法语(拉丁语)词汇比重越来越大。所以这就引出来,传说中的“词根”。建议你,在休息的时候多看看一些有关词根的书,帮助很大的。
关于grammar的问题,我觉得这和单词也是有关系的,在背动词的时候,不要怕麻烦,用这个动词造句,一般造5句左右,对于记忆单词和语法应用就能起到帮助作用。
我觉得单词的记忆很重要,只要学一天英语,单词的记忆就不能放弃,再多的方法,也是我们这些建议者觉得适合自己的方法。希望这位lz,能够早日找到适合自己的记忆方法,新东方的俞敏洪怎样,当年也是背单词背的谢顶~所以还是勤奋,勤奋,再勤奋才是王道!!
up~!
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